Amanda+Kurtyan

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I have a goal. It has been my ultimate goal since I was young. Making it to the Olympics for rhythmic gymnastics would be life changing. I couldn't ask for anything more and one day I hope to accomplish this. I have done gymnastics since I was four, and I get better at it every day. My family, teammates, coaches and myself encourage me to want this. This sport has become my life and I don't know what I would do without it. ======

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I practice five days a week for five hours each day. I believe that in the future my hard work will pay off, and my dream will finally, come true. Practice makes perfect. For this reason, I look forward to practicing as much as I can. Even through all of the pain and stress, I will never give up and surmount all of the difficulties this sport brings. In just a matter of years, I can be on that first place podium, waving to all the people of different countries. I can be an illustrious and inspiring person to others. I feel with my determination, endurance, and confidence, I will get far in this sport. ======

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Being able to have the pride to say, "I made it to the Olympics," would be absolutely life changing. Just imagining the feeling to finally reach what you have been dreaming all your life for, gives me butterflies. I can imagine myself standing on the podium; the brightest smile on my face, my parents in the crowd jumping around and crying of happiness, and all my fans cheering. I hope one I can feel that feeling of thrill, success, and excitement. ======

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All of my life I have had the ultimate dream to make it to the Olympics for my favorite sport, rhythmic gymnastics. With my hard work, determination, and unflinching attitude, I will accomplish this. ======

Amanda Kurtyan Period 3

"Stay gold." This was the last bit of words Johnny could say before he died. I feel that the movie, "The Outsiders," had a greater impact on me than the book "The Outsiders" by S.E. Hinton. Even though the book had more scenes and events, the movie portrayed a better sense of vision and feeling on the events. It enabled the viewer to truly understand what was happening in each part. First, the movie allowed me to see the characters’ appearance. The book gave a detailed description, but once you really see how they look, your thoughts will change. The Socs looked very old school and innocent. They didn't look as tough or scary as the book described. On the other hand, the Greasers looked tough, built, and brave. Their appearance matched their look perfectly and the movie's visual helped me realize that. Seeing their emotions and feelings really emphasizes each part. Next, I enjoyed the characters acting. It helped me see their emotions and how they reacted to different events. The book had some emotionally charged words, but when you actually get to see the characters expression, it will make a greater impact on you. Every depressing, exciting, and humorous part was greatly emphasized. Their actions, emotion, and humor were like a puzzle; they fit each part perfectly. I also loved how Two-Bit had an outgoing personality and Johnny and Pony-boy were very brave for their age. Two-Bit would make fun of the Socs in a humorous and enjoyable manner. Also, Johnny and Ponyboy risked their lives to save children in a burning church. Many other Greasers or Socs would never do that. They also cut and dyed their hair. They were both very generous and willing to do anything to help others. The way they acted towards the Socs showed their relationship. They did not get along and the characters actions expressed that. Finally, I loved the Greasers’ relationship and how they were always acting like brothers. For example, they were always looking out for each other and making sure everything was fine. They could never leave someone behind, and when they went after Johnny in the burning church, it really showed me how close they were. They are willing to risk their lives for each other and the movie inspired me to never take anyone or anything for granted. Things can be taken away from you in just a matter of seconds. Johnny was so young and died because of his bravery and courage. He lost his life, but saved someone else’s. You should cherish your life and loved ones; they might not last as long as you think. The movie helped me comprehend the characters actions and I enjoyed watching it. It gave me a better visual of what was going on and it created suspense. Each part led to the next and kept me at the edge of my seat. The book was great, but the movie made a greater impact on me and gave me emotion for each part.